I certainly cannot know exactly what this feels like, but you expressed it eloquently. Part of being a writer is putting into words that tell a compelling story. I think you have the beginnings of an interesting story. I look forward to more of your voice.
Thank you for your kind words, I hadn't thought to turn it into a story. It was just a little poem I thought I'd right to express some of my feelings. But I have been lacking in inspiration for a story so thank you. I think this will be the next project.
I certainly cannot know exactly what this feels like, but you expressed it eloquently. Part of being a writer is putting into words that tell a compelling story. I think you have the beginnings of an interesting story. I look forward to more of your voice.
Thank you for your kind words, I hadn't thought to turn it into a story. It was just a little poem I thought I'd right to express some of my feelings. But I have been lacking in inspiration for a story so thank you. I think this will be the next project.